Manmarziyan-The Lines of Fate (Prologue)

Hi fellow mmzians my name is Gianna,i’ve had this plot in my head for a long time n wanted to write something on my favorite show characters but was scared that it wont turn out good. But i guess a gutsy bug bit me today n so here i am. I also want to read other ffs but there r so many please do suggest which one should i start with n do give ur precious feedback if i should go on with this or not. Thanks.
Prologue-That Fateful Night
15th Jan 2014, 9:30pm
A College in Delhi-Girls Dorm
Two girls were studying when a phone rang.Girl”Hello… Papa? Everything ok?” The obvious worry in the girl’s voice grab the attention of her roommate.
Man”choti… If anything happens to me promise me one thing dear”
Girl”what r u saying papa? What is going on? What will happen to u? Are u in danger?” Radhika spoke in a single breath.The word danger and the panic expression on her face made her roommate Neha to come close to her, she signal her to put the phone on speaker
Man”promise me u will take care of ur mom and grandpa. .. Promise me dear” the man spoke in fear filled voice. Radhika was in tears now, she didn’t know what to say or what to do n what can she do this far away.
Man “promise me u will complete ur studies n make me proud…. I love u so much my dear don’t forget that”
Everyone used to tell her that she had magic with her words but those words seem to have failed her today. She opened her mouth to say something but nothing came out,what only she could manage btn her sobbing was a weak “papa”
BANG.. BANG… BANG
Three gunshots n everything went silent, all the two girls could hear was some fainted footsteps n the phone got disconnected. Radhika collapsed on the floor holding her knees to her chest sobbing and chanting “he’s dead… he’s dead” her roommate n friend Neha was shocked to the core, she stood in the middle of their room with Radhika’s phone in her hands contemplating what to do next, whom to call. Then it struck her Radhika’s uncle was a cop, he will sure know what to do. She opened the phone contacts and dialed a no. saved “Bade Papa” she explained to him all that has transpired mins ago and the man assured her that he will take care of things and asked her to look after his choti till he gets there.

Next Day
Khanna Textiles-Mumbai
Man”what news do u have Aditya? “Aditya took a long sigh then said “he’s dead… he was shot last night… three shots all to the chest at point blank” after a few mins of silence the man spoke again
Man”i need to go there… I’ve to go to Hrishikesh. Aditya panicked
Aditya” No Sir u can’t do that”
Man”Dilip is my friend.. was my friend. I have to be there with his family”
Aditya”what about ur family, u know why he was killed. If his murderer suspects u… we both know what the outcome would be. If not for urself then think about ur wife and kids”
Man”what about his wife n kid wont they be in danger also? What about Brijesh Uncle? With Dilip gone they are my respobility now”
Aditya”as long as the whereabouts of that gold is unknown they will remain safe… and there are many other ways to help them, u dont have to go there” Aditya knew Samrat was not yet convinced but he cant take any risks. He spoke again this time a bit calm “Samrat sir do u trust? ”
Samrat”what kind of a qn is that u know i trust u”
Aditya”then listen to me… I promise u i’ll take care of everything ”
Samrat had no other choice he knew Aditya was right,if he wanted to keep everyone safe he had to be calm panicking wont help. They both know the enemy but had to find a way to defeat him first.
20 days later
Mishra Home-Hrishikesh
Radhika was packing her bag tomorrow she was going back to Delhi. She wanted to transfer and finish her studies here but her mother wont let her. She relentlessly agreed it was a matter of 2years n she will be back home fulfilling her father’s last wish. Holding her dad’s pic she couldn’t help but wonder how everything changed in such a short time. Papa was dead, no he was murdered, why n by whom it was still a mystery. Mom has changed, she has lost her smile that assuring smile she has always loved. N her grandpa who used to be the life of the family with his jokes n mischiefs now resembles a walking corpse. Tears trickled down her eyes, she had to be strong, yes for her mom n grandpa she will be strong. Besides Bade Papa had promise to bring her dad’s culprit to justice. With time all wounds will heal n her grandpa used to say “No wound is ever too deep to take a lifetime to heal”
But little did she know that time itself can be a burden and when a wound is inflicted time and time again then even a lifetime is not enough to ease the pain.
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Some are born champions some are made. Everyone has there own fate but what if ur fate offers nothing but pain do you surrender to a lifelong of pain or do you fight and write ur own fate?

Manmarziyan-The Lines of Fate (Prologue)

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Manmarziyan-The Lines of Fate (Prologue)

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